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PERSONAL PIECE: HE LAUGHS LIKE A GOD, SO SHATTER MY ASHES
As the days go by the night's on fire
Tell me would you kill to save a life
Tell me would you kill to prove you're right
Crash crash
Burn let it all burn
This hurricane's chasing us all underground
No matter how many deaths that I die I will never forget
No matter how many lies I live I will never regret
There is a fire inside of this heart and a riot about to explode into flames
As the days go by the night's on fire
Tell me would you kill to save a life
Tell me would you kill to prove you're right
Crash crash
Burn let it all burn
This hurricane's chasing us all underground
No matter how many deaths that I die I will never forget
No matter how many lies I live I will never regret
There is a fire inside of this heart and a riot about to explode into flames
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None of you should have to know about my issues at home. I'm sorry for all the irritation and worry I have caused you. This is what I salvaged before the incident last night came up. I am uploading it now because I may not have a chance to finish or upload otherwise. I may be back next week, I may not. I just need to fix my mess right now. I'm upset but I understand that art must take a step down in my priorities.
His name is _________. He cannot get wet. I would like it if you guys could help me name him. I'm out of ideas. Thankyou.
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horse: [link] |BG: [link]|all else, artwork and painting: *falitna (c) 2012
I'm open to critique. This is not entirely finished and someday I will go back and refine...
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2208x1736px 1.64 MB
© 2013 - 2024 falitna
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My first impression of this: WOW!! This is such a unique idea, its just stunning to look at! Its very well executed, with little improvement needed.
Actually, when I first look at this, there is nothing to improve on! But I looked a little closer, and here are my points: <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
The feather on the horse looks rather chunky, especially because it is right next to the tail hair. I understand feather hair is so much thicker than tail hair (grooming grey cobs have taught me that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>) but it could just use a small hard brush on smudge to make it a little bit more lifelike.
The other hair is absolutely stunning, the colours and shadows and light is perfect. The strands could be just a little thinner towards the end, but thats just personal opinion, I still think its beautiful ;3
The thing that stood out to me most is probably the background. The rain is very well done, but I fear the background picture itself is perhaps a bit too dark and blurred. Especially because the sky is very light, making the rest of it seem very dark.
Thats all I can say on it really! Its a very beautiful piece, I can't wait to see your next work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>